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You say you love me,
But you do not show it.

I hear you weep,
Crying that it isn't fair.
You say that you are an adult,
That you should be making your own choices.

Yet each time others stand up,
Putting themselves between us,
You fold under the burden of their ignorant words.

You're nothing more than a house of cards, are you?

How can you say that I mean something to you,
If you aren't even willing to fight for it; for us?
So many times, you whisper to me that your desires are not that of those around you.
Yet, how many of those times have you stood up for what you profess to want?

Not once; instead, you let those who care nothing for you ride you.
Whispering to my face,
You smile and say that you care.
Promises slip past your lips,
That if we simply accept their wishes and wait,
All will end well.

I don't believe that.
How could I?
These people are fools;
They have shown me that they understand nothing of anything.
But you cling to every foolishness they utter,
As though you were starving of sustenance.
As though their uncultured blindness was a solid foundation.

You're nothing more than a house of cards, are you?

You say you love me,
But how can I believe you?

Everything you do now screams one thing.
How can I believe that even if we bow to them,
That even if we wait,
You will stay?

Now, I do not know if I could ever trust you.
If I could ever trust you to stay,
Or whether you'd fly away the moment we met the slightest trouble with other fools.

You're nothing but a house of cards, are you?
©2008-2009 ~Diadrin
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I wrote this because...I find myself in a precarious emotional position. There's someone I've fallen in love with, who I see or talk to now almost every day. She says she loves me, and she's always crying and raging when her mother tells her that she'll never allow her to be with me as long as she's living under that roof, but...

Maybe I'm just being selfish, but I find the fact that she folds to this threat very...disheartening. She is 18 now, an adult, and should be making her own choices. Yet, she continues to allow her piss-poor excuse of a mother to clutch her harpy's claws into her soul and flesh.

To be honest, the idea of having to wait before she'd be by my side is bearable. From the start, she said we'd have to just be friends for a while first. What bothers me is why we're waiting now. And no matter how much I wish I could, I'll never be able to forget exactly why we're waiting. And even when we stop waiting, and finally get together, some part of the back of my mind will always wonder at what point she's going to fold again and leave.
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this is a lovely poem.
great thoughts and strong words.
very good.
and i know what you mean.. im kind of going through the same type of thing.

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Thank you. ^^

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Let me sleep through this time of pain,
And grant me innocent dreams.
Rouse me during the first summer rain,
When all the world's at peace, it seems.
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your welcome =]

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